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Please give me advice and opinions on my poem?

by Guest63101  |  earlier

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Blatant, hollow beauty,

You've slithered down my back.

Fooling all unfortunate beings,

That may have fallen in your path.

Jealous, rampant imperfections,

You've dug your way inside.

I'd like to see you bleed sterling silver,

Those flaws can't be hard to hide.

I can't spend years waiting,

On things that just won't come.

And I can't spend my life wondering,

If you'd approve of the things I've done.

Darling, your sweet lies

And your generic smile,

lead to our bitter goodbyes,

and left me stumbling down the aisle.

The rain falls down,

Like a million reasons

To come back inside.

The rain floods around me,

like one big reminder

of all the tears I've cried.

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  1. nice.

    keep on writinq

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