Please give me feedback on this poem...?

Question

i wrote this poem for a guy im seeing. i usually dont write poems, but im kinda inspired. i just wasnt to kno what u guys think about it. any suggestions??? changes??? add ons??? thanks for your time.

you've brightened up my life

and you've been a wonderful friend

but now i have to let it go

this friendship has to end

my heart and feelings are involved

i just cant hold it back

the road i'm on that once was dark

is no longer black

you stole my heart, it's all yours

and thats completely true

i have be honest, i have to say it

******* i've fallen in love with you.

(the stars are his name)

Answer 1

reads like a 70's love song.

Answer 2

It is heartwrenchingly beautiful. No wasted words.  So hard to leave somone you are in love with because you know they are bad for your personal growth.

WOW!

Write on winner!

T.

Answer 3

if the guy isn't a total bit** He will absolutely LOVE IT

Im a guy and adore it!

Hope this helps, i give u props for that poem ^^

Answer 4

two thumbs up,,,go for it girl....well good luck

Answer 5

It's sweet. Not a classic love poem.. but I guess that's not what you were going for. It's more just like.. rhyming prose rather than a poem, I would say. But it would be sweet in a Valentines card or something :)