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Please give me your opinions on my poem.?

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What if I told you that the

place you call home was

really just a house.

What if I told you that the

polaroids on your walls are

snapshots of your imagination.

Would you still pretend

that your flowers bloom brilliant

every Spring?

Would you still pretend

that your leaves fade

as Autumn impends?

Would you believe

that your world

wasn't crumbling?

Would you

believe that

I tell the truth?

What if I told you that I'm

not real, would you

still be there for me?

copyright : 2008

(I posted a poem earlier today with the same first 3 lines, and then I revised it and came up with this one, tell me what you Think)

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  1. Sad...but good!

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