Please give this poem a rating form 1 to 10?

Question

A mother for her children

Not only did I tell you your my world;you use to sit on my lap that is true;you were only one or two;I use to tell you you are my waterdrop;my sunshine;my snowflack;my morning dew;my watersprout too.

Today you are ;the sweetness on my tongue;the morning breeze;the air that I breath;my heart beat;the light in my life too.

Yesterday I told you;you are an extention of me;the blood that rans through my vains;rans through yours too.My reason for living.

Something you never knew;is how much I enjoy to hold your hand;and whenever I do I am aware of the softness of your flesh;it would remind me of your innocents;I still do today;I still do the same.

Your face one of angels above;those big eyes in which I swear I see waterpuddles and lights twinkle;if I were able to find the words I would have told you;how beautiful you are.

At this stage of your life;just a beautiful sprout;innocent and wild;a flower from my garden.

Answer 1

i would say it is pretty good....and if you wrote it....cool!! so i;d say.....7...keep on writing...or whatever!!!

Answer 2

5

Answer 3

i give it a 10.jasmine