Please help ,hi i have to do a story for english..?

Question

i wrote it .....it is about a man who is going to kill himself becuase his wife has died, i wrote the second part of how she died it was about her dying becuase she saw a murder but the teacher says it doesn't make sense, what could i write,. HOW COULD SHE HAVE DIED, i have to write it in her propspective, please help????????

Answer 1

She could have died in an airplane accident, that way you can describe the whole experience up until the point where the plane falls in the water and explodes.

Answer 2

she died when she was saving a chiled when she saw a very fas car coming towords him...she pushed him away and the car collied her

Answer 3

i am not sure about this story.. maybe you can turn into a horror story..

she died, because the one who is murdered is haunting her...she might fell down from a building.. the husband died because he is blaming himself, why he did not believe her about the murder that she have seen.. she died the same way like the one she saw,,,..

maybe she died saving someone else, like saving the husband from the ghost...

Answer 4

if she saw the murder, the murderer could have gone for her as she was the only witness