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Please help? Honest opinions?

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http://allpoetry.com/poem/4422163

http://allpoetry.com/poem/4421655

http://allpoetry.com/poem/4421489

If you have suggestions on changes, please include how to change them: (EX: Make it longer; how do I make it longer?)

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  1. The first one suggests you have issues with men!

    I like the second one best.


  2. You have a great ability to write, I liked it.

  3. I love it. Bloody brilliant! So evocative and the imagery? Wow! Wonderful work...thank you for sharing!
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