Please help me out with my spellcaster deck building...?

Question

I am asking for 2 things. First, to rate my deck (1-10) If there's any reason why you gave it a rating other than 10 please tell me why for that I really want to improve my deck building skills. Second, please help me fix my deck, see what card/s I should take out (I have only 50 plastics so if you could please limit the number of cards to 50) Thank you so much for your kind help guys.

My deck:

Monster:(26)

chaos command magician

magician of faith x2

blast magician

chaos socerer

ebon magician curran

apprentice magician x2

white magician pickeru

relinquished

breaker the magical worrior

dark eradicator warlock

socerer of dark magic

rapid-fire magician

hannibal necromancer

skilled dark magician

eria the water charmer

wynn the wind charmer

dark magician x3

familiar-possessed - hiitax2

hiita the fire charmer

shadowpriestess of ohm

mythical beast cerberus

magic/spell (26)

remove trap

yami

dark hole

swords of revealing light

mage power

graceful charity

black illusion ritual

Answer 1

there are a lot of problems with this deck, im not sure i even feel comftorable giving it a rating in its current state. 1st off you should def reduce the card count to 40-45. Even 50 is too high. Dark hole/graceful charity/magician of faith, all of these are banned. Even if your playing traditional, magician of faith is limited to 1 copy per deck. Swords of revieling light is not a useful card unless perhaps in a burn deck. It causes you to lose 1 card, swords itself, while your opponenet looses none! The 3 turns you buy for yourself is not as useful as you think. Also Im not a fan of ritual monsters, it doesnt seem like you have any good support to back up a relinquished strategy at all so take him out all together. Yami, is a useless feild card, and really has no place in the deck. United we stand > mage power. Remove trap only works on face up, meaning most likely continous, therefore I would suggest taking it out. Oh Breaker the magical warrior is also banned. You have a lot of useless monsters in this deck.... you should add some of the staples(cards good in any deck) such as neo spacian grand mole, marshmallon, ect.

use some of this advice to shave down your deck size, sorry i couldnt fully rewrite it but its rather cumbersome to weed through such a large list.

Answer 2

only 4/10

there are truely alot of cards in there that are not supeosed to be and also teh decks now are 40 cards and not 50 cards. hear is a better deck to try and use. also you should be awear of the bannlist and that some cards cant be use while others you can only have 1 or 2 in your deck

3 dark magician

3 skilled dark magician

3 apprentice magician

3 old vindictive magician

2 cristal seer

1 snipe hunter

1 treeborn frog

1 spirit reaper

1 marshmallon

1 neo spacian grand mole

1 sangan

3 magical dimention

2 dark magic curtain

1 nobel man of crossout

2 pot of avarice

1 monster reborn

1 premature burial

1 heavy storm

1 giant trunade

1 mystical space typhoon

1 fissure

1 swords of reavealing lights

1 brain contrl

1 scape goat

1 mirror force

1 torrential tribute

1 magic cylinder