Please help me study English?

Question

Hello. Im foreiner, and If I wrote some wrong sentences,please let me know!

-First of all,I'll tell you where the my classroom is. First,ascend the stairs to go to my classroom. then,you can see a teacher's room.now, turn right and turn left. go straight through the hallway.go to the third door on the left.Enter the classroom.

Second,I'll tell you the way to the lunchroom in my school. After ascending the stairs, turn right. then, you can see the hallway.now,go to the end of the hallway. and turn right. you can find lots of stairways. Descend that stairways, you can find the luchroom.

thanks

Answer 1

um, you need to leave a space after a comma

Answer 2

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