Please help me to check the grammar, thank you?

Question

Creative artists are a group of pioneers that express their opinions of modern society in methods of words, pictures or films, etc. Their views reflect the reality of society or the direction of development but the expressing ways of these views have caused violent controversy.

Normally the majority of artists’ views are presented to people through the ways of films, music or books. Writers, for instance, prefer to record the experience in life and generalize their views from various experiences by writing novels or establish forums in newspapers. To society, these ways are acceptable as they not only provide a stage for innovative thoughts but also promote the step of multi-culture development.

Answer 1

Their views reflect the reality of society or the direction of development , but the expressing ways of these views have caused violent controversy.

(you forgot the comma between development and but)

Answer 2

Creative artists are a group of pioneers who express their opinions of modern society through words, pictures, or films. Their views reflect both the reality of society and the direction of its development. However, the means of expression has caused violent controversy.

Normally, the majority of views are presented in films, music, or books. Writers, for instance, prefer to record their life experience and present their views in novels or newspaper forums. These methods are socially acceptable, since they not only provide a stage for innovative thoughts but promote multicultural development as well.

I copied and pasted the entire item for ease of comparison. Your ideas are excellent. Not bad grammar so much as awkward construction. Hope this helps. Good luck with your project.

Answer 3

I cut and paste what you wrote and made changes:

Creative artists are a group of pioneers that express their opinions of modern society in methods of words, pictures or FILMS. Their views reflect the reality of society or the direction of development but the expressing ways of these views have caused violent controversy.

GENERALLY the majority of artists’ views are presented to people through  films, music or books. Writers, for instance, prefer to record the experience in life and generalize their views from various experiences by writing novels or establish forums in newspapers. To society, these ways are acceptable as they not only provide a stage for innovative thoughts but also promote the step of multi-culture development.