Please help me with my cover letterr!!!

Question

Name

State

Home phone number

Email

Date

Dear Ms. Sally Stiner:

I am interested in auditioning for the part of Macy on J.O.N.A.S.

My performance opportunities have included school and community musicals, as well as many orchestra and dance recitals. I’ve also attended quite a few dance competitions.

Thank you for taking the time to read this. I appreciate the opportunity.

Sincerely,

Signature

Me

How is it? I saw in a template to put the address of the place your sending, should I do this? Should I put specific names of shows? I thought since it was included in my resume I wouldn't. Any suggestions would be great!

Should I put my cell phone number (it's on resume)? I read not to put your address so I just put my state. Is that okay?

Answer 1

you cant put your address, yeah. But you should put your parents work address.

I dont think you need a cover letter for the part of Jonas...

i also wouldnt put

Dear Sally Stiner

maybe you should put what it says on the address

"Sally Stiner/Barbie Block Casting"

Answer 2

it's okay, but you need to add way more details on your performances and stuff like that. btw, what is this JONAS thing about? I love the Jonas Brothers and what the heck is this?

Answer 3

Yeah, I agree, it is good, but you don't need a cover letter for this part. Usually you don't need cover letters for acting jobs, that's just for other jobs. Usually, haha.

Answer 4

I have a degree in professional and business writing and I do this for a living. Here is how your cover letter should look. You def. need to redo it, but you have a good start!

Name of Business

Address

City, State Zip

Date of Letter

Dear___________

1 st paragraph: Intro yourself and that you are interested in the part

2nd paragraph: List experiences relevant to the part you are interested in

3rd paragraph: Why your experience would make you a good candidate for the part

4th paragraph: " Thank you for taking the time to review my resume. I look forward to speaking with you regarding an audition for....."

Regards or Sincerely

Your name (leave a space so you can sign it)

address

city state zip

phone (best one to reach you)

email

for each paragraph write about 4-5 sentences. You don't want your letter to be more than one page.

Good luck!

Answer 5

you don't need a cover letter for the part of macy