Please help me with my history essay?

Question

I have an essay to do for summer school. I really cant fail again or I will get held back, so PLEASE help with any grammar or content issues!!!! The topic is comparing the civil war to the current iraqi war.

The civil war and current iraq war were at different times, but is that all that is different about them? Well no. Civil war soldiers faught with hand grenades, smaller tanks, and through damaging radio waves. Specifically ones that honed in on the enemy brain and made them think "hey, why dont i shoot my frand?" In the iraq war they have b52 bombers and the unibomber, along with microcosims. But is that all they have in common. This time, the answer is a resounding YES! If you take the name of Saddam L. Hussein and rearange it you get the initials A.L. aka, ABE LINCOLN. Coincidence? I think not. At the time of their death, they both had a LOT of facial hair. It is with that evidence that I hypothesis that the iraqi's are evolution descendants of abe lincoln

Answer 1

Too much wrong information in this

essay. Pick something easier and start

over. This one will never fly. (sorry).

Answer 2

Rewrite in third person present tense.  Positive comparisons only.

Answer 3

Funny Goober

Answer 4

Ok first off, Civil War, there were no tanks, grenades or damaging radio waves, fought between the Union and the Confederacy (Union=North, Confederacy=South). The War was caused by Union wanting federal government wanting control while Confederacy wanted local State leaders to control. Iraq war, started as retaliation for 9/11, main reason for staying there now is for oil regulation. And NO, Saddam Hussein is not an anagram for Abe Lincoln.