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Please help me with my lyric, having problem to rhyme?

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I'm writing a rap lyric about my country, and now i'm kind of stuck. please help me, i need it. i got the words i wanna use but i cant make it rhyme in my lines. It goes like this '' Where i'm form's a place you could call paradise, population 80,000 we live a happy life, 3 refugees on the street yeah that's all we got, Appointment with the president don't gotta wear no business suit, Nokia phone as my neckless that's how we balls" stuck here! I need your help people out there, please do. i'll really appreciate it. 10 points waiting. I'll give you some info of what i want to put in there. ''115 Island, We all ride high on s11 (that's walking), 25 district, beaches all over, alot of tourist all the time, people are friendly, you can walk through the night without worrying getting rob, we got the biggest nut, no stormy weather, please help. And fix the one i wrote if you feel that is lame! Thanks in advance.

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  1. where i'm from you can call it paradise, we're populated 80,000 and we live a happy life. 3 refugees on  the streets that's all we have. appointment with the president aint gotta wear no fancy dress. because we dont care what other people think it aint no stress.

    25 district, beaches everywhere. people all around is friendly as if they all care. aint got no stormy weather, or lunatics. You can walk around the streets at night without worrying you'll get picked (meaning robbed).

    so go to my country if you're up for a flick. (i hope that helps you)

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