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Please help what do you think of my persuasive speech?

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what else should i include what facts should i add and how my conclusion should look like? thanks

Andres Vele

Recycling is such an important environmental issue, and yet it seems as though there isn’t much done about it as a community. If you ask a random person on the street what they think about recycling, nine times out of ten they’ll smirk and tell you it’s good for the environment. But, really, they don’t understand the significance of recycling. Recycling is plainly returning an item back to its original condition so that it can be reused. Recycling is so important to the welfare of our community, and to the welfare of the planet. Today I am going to concentrate specifically on plastic bottle recycling, and why every single park in the the state of New York should have a recycling bin for plastic bottles.

According to the Container Recycling Institute (CRI), a Washington-based nonprofit organization, eight out of 10 plastic water bottles used in the United States become garbage or end up in a landfill, plastic bottles take about ten thousand years to decompose and during the process of decomposition it emits dioxin gas which is quiet but poisonous for the soil and detrimental for one’s health. Recycling a ton of plastic bottles, which is an approximate of 24.000 12oz bottles, saves approximately 3.8 barrels of oil and 7.4 cubic yards of landfill space. And you might think this is a lot bottles, but according to the CRI a person drinks an average of two bottles a day.

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  1.   Not bad, so far.  Just change line 4 to: ...what he thinks about recycling (not they) and...he'll smirk  (not they'll).  Next sentence: But ...people don't understand the significance...

       Paragraph 2, line 9:  ...which is approximately 24.000...

      Your conclusion should tie it all together.  What will happen if we allow all these bottles to lie on the ground for the next few years?  What can we do with the recycled bottles?  Give examples of what we can gain from recycling.

       So far, so good!

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