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Please judge my poem?

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is this as crappy as i think it is?

creations these little birds of clay in your hand.

does it mean anything or is it something no one will understand?

Flicking the wings as the horns sprout.

your hand begins to rot as you slump closer to the ground

chirping turns to roars of an ungodly sound.

they soon eagerly fly away far away

your nothing now

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  1. Truthfully i understand what your talking about, it is worded okay, but it seems done already.


  2. sux

  3. Good effort!
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