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Question

Hi , please review this poem

Silent Victory.-Ru hewage

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Sleep clad eyes barely awake,

Melt in fear at molten rage;

Sickened pain born of these questions,

My moments dusted heavy with query;

The hour is yet not nigh!

When victory that is mine will sun;

Holding steadfast the quiet knowledge;

Stand dour against the racing horse.

Strife ridden wagging heavy,

Imagine shutting my ears much as child;

Potent pregnant threats leave my hearing,

Victory is not far!

Answer 1

I believe this is about "the recovering child" in us all whose victory in overcoming the questions, the pain and  voices of the past is quite near.

"potent pregnant threats leave my hearing,

Victory is not far!"  

Just a beautifully written and expressed piece of poetry.  My Kudos.

P.S.  Be sure to phrase your posts in the form of questions or sooner or later you run the risk of being violated.

Answer 2

very touching poem nice your very talented

Answer 3

good