ok, i have finally got over writers block!! Please comment my poem, the first verse is the devil speaking, then it is God, the the third is the devil, and the last is God again. I know some people may have religous views on this poem and might hate Christianity, please... i don't want to know!
Crosstalk
Considering every emotion I have laid down,
Trespassing every thought that I have swallowed.
Dissolving every smile into...
A concentrated frown,
Seeking every movement that I have followed.
Breathe! And let your love ripple,
Let it spread out into a dozen rings.
Grind the hatred it does cripple,
Soar like a...
Like a dove on eagles wings.
I'll feed your soul with the knowledge,
That I have moulded with bloody claws.
I'll tell you things that...
Things that no being could acknowledge,
If you let me drag your self-being over marble floors.
Oh, my children with skin so warm,
I delight in you, I delight in the fact that you walk...
That you think, that you move, that your heart beats!
I know you may follow the dead side of crosstalk,
I tell you as a Father to ignore.
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