Please proofread my thank you letter.?

Question

I was honored and thrilled when I learned that you selected me to be the recipient for this scholarship. Thank you very much for the award of $1000 from your scholarship program. Your support means a lot to me and for helping to achieve my goal.

I am originally from the Ukraine and my family moved here 3 years ago. Living in this country, I appreciate the opportunities offer to me. What I like about UW-Parkside is that it changed my life to become a good student and believing myself. I am very thankful for my supportive professors and advisors for helping me out anything. I am happy about my Music study at Parkside. This semester will be my first year in piano program and I am very much excited about it.

Again, thank you for your award.

Answer 1

I was honored and thrilled when I learned that you selected me as the recipient for your scholarship program.  Your support meant a lot to me .  Thank you for helping me achieve my goal.

My family and I originally moved here three years ago from the Ukraine.  I appreciate the opportunities living here has offered me.  UW-Parkside has changed my life by helping me to become a better student and giving me the chance to believe in myself.  I am very thankful for my supportive professors and advisers for helping me.  I am looking forward for my first year to study music at Parkside.

Again, thank you for your award.

Answer 2

Write a thank you in the present tense, not the past tense.

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I am honored and thrilled that you selected me to recieve your award of $1000 from your scholarship program. Your support means very much to me as it will allow me to achieve my goals in life.

My family and I moved here three years ago from Ukraine. I appreciate the opportunities that living here has offered me. UW-Parkside has changed my life by helping me to become a better student and giving me the chance to believe in myself. I am very thankful for my supportive professors and advisers for helping me. I am looking forward to my first year of piano studies at Parkside.

Thank you again, for your scholarship award.