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Question

Is it best,

That no one hear your cries,

To secretly spill your heart,

Through your eyes?

Is it smart,

To not share the pain,

Put on your smile,

Tell a few little lies?

Is it fair,

To your aching heart,

To pretend everything's okay,

And not falling apart?

Why live through the pain?

All it takes,

Is an ear to listen,

A hug to stop the aches.

Answer 1

I like it!!

You make it relatable to the reader!!

Answer 2

good advise.  not a great poem.  But keep writing.  Poems take practice.

Answer 3

Wow that was deep...

very good though

Answer 4

wow.. thats really good. but where itsays "tell a few little lies" just take out  the little and it's beautiful

Answer 5

It's awesome...how at first you could pretent to the world you're ok and then at the end u realize you do need a shoulder to cry on...awesome..

Answer 6

I love this. Your writing is brimming with emotion. Depending on how old you are I recommend you send it into Teen Ink through their website. (Best Answer)

Answer 7

whoa..that actually like...makes sense

i totally get what you mean. and it scans too!

great job. i couldnt write something even near half as good :P

Answer 8

Don't allow pain to dwell in your heart.

We all are given the choice to think mentally beneficial thoughts or harmful to our sole being. Make the choice that's beneficial to yourself and you will soon find someone that you can confide in.

Answer 9

thats good

Answer 10

wow... interesting...

Answer 11

I love it.

I think it's perfect!

Answer 12

Wow, that is actually really good, I like how you set it up.

Answer 13

sounds good

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