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I am 13 years old.

Now my cancers gone,

And my loved ones gone astray.

No more stopping by,

Just to see if I’m okay.

No more stopping by,

With a “’hey” or “how’s it going”

No More helpful words,

To keep me from forgoing.

“You’ve had to grow up fast.”

Is what I often hear.

I say - The Cancer may be gone,

But “Remissions” barley near.

No one will understand,

No matter how they might try.

The medicine needed was love,

Which they wouldn’t supply.

Answer 1

Great poem 10/10!!!

Answer 2

This is a lovely poem! My aunt has cancer so I can relate a little bit.

I have never found a good poem by a guy this young before. Keep in writing!

Answer 3

If you actually ARE a child recovering from cancer I wish I could cheer you up by saying you are a good poet, but I'd be lying.

Answer 4

Bravo! Bravo! I applaud you. You are very talented. Your words are very true.  Don't give up on people though.

Answer 5

Love your poem. I can relate to it a lot my father had cancer and ppl would come to see him everyday... but now that he is gone to a better place ppl don't come no more to see the family