Please rate and fix my yugioh deck 1/10?

Question

Monsters

DARK HORUS x1

VAMPIRE'S CURSE x1

YUBELx1

YUBEL TERROR INCARNATEx1

YUBELTHE ULTIMATE NIGHMAREx1

DESPAIR FROM THE DARKx1

THE DARK CREATORx1

RYU KOKKI x1

GRAVE SQUIRMER x1

MYSTIC TOMATO x3

PETEN THE DARK CLOWN x3

DARK CRUSADER x2

PHANTOM SKYBLASTER x2

OBSIDIAN DRAGON x1

CASTLE GATE x1

RAPID-FIRE MAGICIAN x1

THE CALCULATOR x1

SLATE WARRIOR x1

GIANT RAT x1

PYRAMID TURTLE x1

SPIRIT REAPER x1

NEO-SPACIAN GRAND MOLE x1

OLD VINDICTIVE MAGICIAN x1

Spells

CARD TRADER x1

BRAIN CONTROL x1

HAND DESTRUCTION x1

FIRES OF DOOMSDAY X1

MONSTER REBORN x1

HEAVY STORM x1

LIGHTING VORTEX x1

SWORDS OF REVEALING LIGHT x1

TRIBUTE TO THE DOOMED x1

PREMATURE BURIAL x1

MALEVOLENT NUZZLER x1

OFFERINGS TO THE DOOMED x1

Traps

NEGATE ATTACK x1

ZOMA THE SPIRIT x1

MAGIC JAMMER x1

MALFUCTION x1

MAGIC CYLINDER x1

ORDEAL OF A TRAVELER x1

ULTIMATE OFFERING x1

DRAINING SHIELD x1

Answer 1

needs a theme

Answer 2

Here you have just thrown a load of good cards together. I usually don't like to say this but it sort of works (with the monsters at least). HOWEVER you have 49 cards and a load of second-rate traps. this is what you need to change:

- Despair from the dark

- All Traps

- Offerings to the Doomed

+ Mirror Force

+ Torrential Tribute

+ (2) Royal Decree

Other than that, go kick duelist a$$ in a duel!

Answer 3

why ask that??? ur own opinion on ur deck is what matters the most i give u a 6/10.

good luck!!!

Answer 4

i dotn collect yugio cards no more but u shold get better cards i have alotta good cards like  rlly good 1s if u could find out a way to buy them from me ill sell em cheap just contact me

Answer 5

thats not a deck and i'll be surprised if you can win any experienced player with a decent deck...

1st:no main theme...cards seem to have nthing in common

2nd: way too many cards

from the majority of cards here are dark affinity, i would say you can choose 1)yubel deck, 2)dark dragon deck(dark horus,dark arm D, dark creator, but since you lack DAD this is out.)as i play yubel i shall help you out a bit,

Yubel build(cheap way):

DARK HORUS x1        

VAMPIRE'S CURSE x1

YUBELx3

YUBEL TERROR INCARNATEx1

YUBELTHE ULTIMATE NIGHMAREx1

THE DARK CREATORx1

MYSTIC TOMATO x3

DARK CRUSADER x2-optional

PHANTOM SKYBLASTER x2

OBSIDIAN DRAGON x1(more will be fine)

THE CALCULATOR x2

SPIRIT REAPER x1

NEO-SPACIAN GRAND MOLE x1

OLD VINDICTIVE MAGICIAN x2

Caius the Shadow Monarch x 2

Spells

CARD TRADER x1

BRAIN CONTROL x1

FIRES OF DOOMSDAY X1

MONSTER REBORN x1

HEAVY STORM x1

LIGHTING VORTEX x1

SWORDS OF REVEALING LIGHT x1

PREMATURE BURIAL x1

Dark Eruption x1

Share the pain x1

Foolish burial x2

Traps

MAGIC JAMMER x1

MAGIC CYLINDER x1

Torrential tribute x1

DRAINING SHIELD x1

Mirror force x1

Raigeki break x1

Royal decree x2

42 cards total

Answer 6

First of all, this isn't even a deck.  It looks to me that you just grabbed any good card you could find and threw them together to form a deck.  You have no strategy at all.  It looks to me that you have alot of dark monsters in there.  If you want to make a dark deck I'll give you my decklist and maybe you can get some ideas and you can work from there.  Mind you that my deck will cost an awful lot of money to actually make.  However, from the cards that you have listed I think you can work with it and create a lesser version of the one I have.  Well here it is:

Main Deck - 44

Monsters - 22

2 Darklord Zerato

1 Dark Magician of Chaos

1 Destiny Hero - Plasma

2 Dark Nephthys

1 Jinzo

1 Van'Dalgyon the Dark Dragon Lord

1 Destiny Hero - Dasher

1 Elemental Hero Stratos

1 Strike Ninja

1 Dark Grepher

2 Armageddon Knight

1 Destiny Hero - Fear Monger

2 Gravekeeper's Spy

1 Destiny Hero - Disk Commander

2 Cyber Valley

1 Sangan

1 Spirit Reaper

Spells - 13

2 Allure of Darkness

3 Trade-In

1 Heavy Storm

1 Monster Reborn

1 Premature Burial

1 Brain Control

2 Fires of Doomsday

1 Scapegoat

1 D.D.R. - Different Dimension Reincarnation

Traps - 9

1 Mirror Force

1 Torrential Tribute

2 Solemn Judgment

2 Phoenix Wing Wind Blast

2 Limit Reverse

1 Return from the Different Dimension