Please rate/fix my Yu-Gi-Oh Deck 1-10?

Question

Could you please rate/fix my current Yu-Gi-Oh Twilight Deck 1-10.

Monsters: 24

2 Light and Darkness Dragon

1 Dark Magician of Chaos

2 Darklord Zerato

2 Caius the Shadow Monarch

2 Kuraz the Light Monarch

2 Cyber Dragon

1 Destiny Hero - Dasher

2 Dark Grepher

1 Snipe Hunter

1 Armageddon Knight

1 Destiny Hero - Fear Monger

1 Sangan

1 Card Trooper

1 Destiny Hero - Disk Commander

1 Spirit Reaper

1 Treeborn Frog

2 Cyber Valley

Spells: 12

2 Allure of Darkness

1 Trade-In

1 Foolish Burial

1 Reinforcement of the Army

1 Lightning Vortex

1 Heavy Storm

1 Mystical Space Typhoon

1 Monster Reborn

1 Premature Burial

1 Brain Control

1 Fires of Doomsday

Traps: 5

1 Mirror Force

1 Limit Reverse

1 Torrential Tribute

2 Phoenix Wing Wind Blast

Total: 41 cards

Fusion Deck: 3

1 Cyber Twin Dragon

1 Gladiator Beast Gyzarus

1 Chimeratech Overdragon

Side Deck: 15

1 Jinzo

1 Destiny Hero - Plasma

2 D.D. Crow

1 Book of Moon

1 Enemy Controller

1 Reinforcement of the Army

1 Scapegoat

1 Trade-In

2 Dust Tornado

2 Pulling the Rug

2 Royal Decree

Answer 1

i'd give it a    4/10

Answer 2

I don't see what kind of deck it is.  I guess it's a mix?  Well, I will give it a 8/10, mainly for the effort.

Answer 3

8/10.

Answer 4

6.5 out of 10 but my deck will stomp yours

Answer 5

You should change your deck to all dark, it not good to have half of dark and half of other

Just some cards that you should add....

crush card virus

dark armed dragon

metal reflect slime

two destiny hero malicious

allure of darkness

just keeping on adding better cards

Right now I would rate you 8.2/10

Answer 6

really some of your best cards are in your side deck so i would take out one kuraz for jinzo and you have too much tribute monsters

4/10