Please rate/fix my stall/ exodia deck?( For competition)?

Question

Monsters- 20

Exodia the Forbidden One

Right Leg of the Forbidden One

Left Leg of the Forbidden One

Right Arm of the Forbidden One

Left Arm of the Forbidden Lord

Lava Golem -2

Golden Ladybug- 2

Nimble Musasabi -2

Stealth Bird -2

Marshmallon

Neo-Spacian Grand Mole

Spirit Reaper

Beserk Gorilla

Black Stego

Man-Eater Bug

Kuriboh

Spells-13

Marshmallon Glasses

Deck Lockdown

Cold Wave-3

Level Limit - Area B

Messenger of Peace

Swords of Revealing Light

Nightmare's Steelcage

MST

Tribute to the Doomed

A Feather of the Phoenix

Monster Reincarnation

Traps-10

Michizure

Ordeal of a Traveler-2

Sakuretsu Armor-2

Gravity Bind

Threatening Roar

Negate Attack

Ojama Trio

Waboku

Deck- 43

Side Deck-15

Jinzo

Scapegoat

Burden of the Mighty

Amplifier

Giant Trunade

Lightning Vortex

Monster Reborn

Chain Energy

Toll

Earthquake

Divine Wrath

Trap Hole

Draining Shield

Skill Drain

Dust Tornado

Answer 1

6/10

i think this deck needs a lot of work. if your only goal is to draw exodia, then you need draw cards. lots of them. take out your useless cards like marshmallon glasses (no point) man eater bug, Chain energy(!?!), earthquake, berserk gorilla(why is THAT there?!?) lava golems, stealth birds(this is exodia stall, not burn) and anything else that you can cut that has NOTHING to do with your goal. dont wander around to different themes, stay on task and achieve your goal. add multiple copies of hand destruction, card trader, Magical Mallet, maybe even run the draw combo where you play ojamagic just to achieve a big hand, then trade it all with magical mallet!!! I CANNOT believe that you dont even have a sangan!!! thats like the best card!! just keep working on it and remember that good decks stay on focus and runs multiple copies of useful cards.

hope this has helped

Answer 2

add some foolish burial i know it sounds crazy but u can use it to ditch your pieces to the graveyard then add backup soldier so you can retrive any 3 normal monster with 1500 or less back to your hand.also 3 hand destructions should help you cut down to get those pieces add card trader if you want to. jar of greed helps a little bit solemn judgement also handy but i like your deck you have a good idea how you are going to use it u have many stall cards but u also needs drawing power for an exodia deck also ordeal of the traveler isnt such a great card a person might get 1 card wrong the 1st time but he knows if its a monster ect the next time so anyway id rate it 8/10