Please rate/fix my yugioh Dark deck?

Question

I call it a dark deck but some monsters aren't dark.

monsters:

1x grave protector

3x dark crusader

1x old vindictive magician

1x yubel

1x yubel - terror incarnate

1x spirit reaper

1x exiled force

3x giant orc

1x armageddon knight

1x pitch-black warwolf

1x night assailant

1x caius the shadow monarch

1x mystic tomato

1x grave squirmer

1x prime material dragon

1x snipe hunter

1x chainsaw insect

spells:

1x dark eruption (thinking of switching to premature burial)

1x brain control

1x monster reborn

1x bait doll

1x burden of the mighty

1x lightning vortex

1x mage power

1x mystic plasma zone

1x wicked-breaking flamberge - baou

1x fires of doomsday

1x heavy storm

1x fairy meteor crush

traps:

1x dimension wall

3x sakuretsu armor

1x trap jammer

1x radiant mirror force (dont have the normal)

1x magic cylinder

1x reckless greed

1x light of intervention

Answer 1

7/10 not that bad It's A Ok Yu Gi Oh Deck

Answer 2

The World of Yubels.

Enjoyable.

Monsters:

- 1 Grave Protector

- 3 Dark Crusader

- 1 Exiled Force

- 3 Giant Orc

- 1 Pitch-Black Werewolf

- 1 Night Assailant

- 1 Chainsaw Insect

Grave Protector won't last long. Especially if Smashing Ground hits it. Dark Crusader makes you lose a card in your hand. Exiled Force doesn't fit with the theme. Giant Orc is just an easy obstacle to go past with, unless you have Deck Devastation Virus, then keep the Orcs. Pitch-Black Werewolf is just weak, and Night Assailant is too slow. (Why Old Vinidictive is still in, I will tell you later) Chainsaw Insect is a nah, giving your opponent more options is a bad thing.

+ 2 Caius the Shadow Monarch

+ 3 Apprentice Magician

+ 2 Old Vindictive Magician

+ 2 Mystic Tomato

+ 1 Newdoria

Caius is a must in this deck, you remove 1 card on the field that can threaten you, shall be eliminated. Apprentice Magicain and OVM work wonders as you have shrunk your deck to get more chances of getting Caius on the field. Mystic Tomato provides presence and Newdoria can be Special Summoned with Mystics. And best of all, they can be easily obtained in the Gold Series, while Mystic Tomato can be easily found in the Kaiba Evo Starter while Caius is in the Dark Structure.

Spells and Traps:

- 1 Dark Eruption

- 1 Bait Doll

- 1 Burden of the Mighty

- 1 Mage Power

- 1 Mystic Plasma Zone

- 1 Wicked-Breaking Flamberge Baou

- 1 Fairy Meteor Crush

- 1 Dimension Wall

  - 1 Trap Jammer

- 1 Radiant Mirror Force

- 1 Magic Cylinder

- 1 Reckless Greed

- 1 Light of Intervention

Dark Eruption should be best used if you have Crush Card Virus, and a whole lot of Yubels in the Grave. Bait Doll goes back into your deck, slowing you down. Burden of the Mighty is not going to make a difference, in fact side deck, when you are against Gadgets and Six Sams. Mage Power is only going to kill you when you have a monster losing an equip card with it, Mystic Plasma Zone screws the entire field up (benefits your opponent too). Fairy Meteor Crush is not good and Baou too refer to the reason of Mage Power. The rest of the Traps doesn't even fit with the deck.

  + 1 Torrential Tribute

+ 3 Bottomless Trap Hole

+ 2 Allure of Darkness

+ 1 Premature Burial

+ 1 Smashing Ground

+ 1 Mystical Space Typhoon

+ 1 Lightning Vortex

+ 2 Foolish Burial

+ 1 Solemn Judgment



Torrential Tribute is a mass removalist. You need especially when you can use it to kill your own Yubel and bring out Terror Incarnate. Bottomless Trap Hole is to stop Judgment Dragon and DAD. Allure for draw power. Premature Burial for revival. Smashing Ground is a free cost card, why not play it? MST, removal. Lightning Vortex is the same. Foolish Burial shrinks your deck. And this is probably the hardest card to get, but Solemn can s***w your opponent up. That's all for now.

Good luck! :]