Please rate my Perfect/Twilight Circle deck?

Question

I haven't made it yet so yea. I wanna know if its good first. Also are Twilight Circles better than Macro Monarch?

Monsters -18

2x Light and Darkness Dragon

3x Caius the Shadow Monarch

2x Destiny Hero - Malicious

3x Destiny Hero - Fear Monger

1x Morphing Jar

1x Destiny Hero - Plasma

1x Elemental Hero Stratos

1x Sangan

1x Treeborn Frog

1x Marshmallon

1x Card Ejector

1x Cyber Dragon

Spells 15

3x Soul Exchange

3x Destiny Draw

2x Reinforcement of the Army

1x Mystical Space Typhoon

1x Heavy Storm

1x Monster Reborn

1x Scapegoat

1x Brain Control

1x Foolish Burial

1x Lightning Vortex

Traps 7

2x Phoenix Wing Wing Blast

1x Crush Card Virus

1x Torrential Tribute

2x Solemn Judgment

1x Mirror Force

Thanks

Answer 1

Looks pretty good to me, nice work. 9.5/10

Answer 2

+1 Destiny Hero - Malicious

-1 Destiny Hero - Fear Monger

-1 Card Ejector

Deck in it's current status: 9.5

Answer 3

8.5/10

Put in Dark Mirror Force and CYberdark dragon