Please rate my Poem: "A Kind of Torture."?

Question

Have you ever felt a feeling that you didn't want to feel?

Felt the aching pain of a wound that wouldn't heal?

Ever been confused and tried to push strange things away?

Been scared of situations that we all face everyday?

Ever hated the world so much you feel you want to die?

Ever just sat down and then started to cry?

It's like i'm in a box, trying madly to get out

Nobody will listen, so I start to scream and shout

Everyone pretends that they care

your life is now a real nightmare

Everyone pretends they're your friend

when will this confusion end?

It feels like i'm going mad

It feels like, a Kind of Torture

Answer 1

I don't like 'rating things, because you'll take it personally. Here goes anyway. It sounds like a teenage angst thing. If you want it to be taken seriously (as in get published) you need to state what ou are mad/ scared of. I know that cuts your creativity a bit, but it will help the reader identify with what you are going through.