Please rate my VanDalgyon Macro Monarch deck?

Question

Monsters: 20

2 Caius the Shadow Monarch

1 Raiza the Storm Monarch

1 Thestalos the Firestorm Monarch

1 VanDalgyon The Dark Dragon Lord

1 Cyber Dragon

3 D.D. Survivor

2 D.D. Assailant

1 D.D. Warrior Lady

1 Snipe Hunter

2 Exiled Force

2 D.D. Scout Plane

1 Morphing Jar

1 Neo Spacian Grand Mole

1 Banisher of Radiance

Spells: 12

3 Dimensional Fissure

2 Reinforcement of the Army

1 Lightning Vortex

1 Mystical Space Typhoon

1 D.D.R. - Different Dimension Reincarnation

1 Enemy Controller

1 Brain Control

Traps: 9

2 Macro Cosmos

1 Return from the Different Dimension

2 Divine Wrath

1 Torrential Tribute

1 Bottomless Trap Hole

1 Escape from the Dark Dimension

1 Solemn Judgement

Answer 1

SHAWTY IS A 10

Answer 2

...this is not gotta work...take out van and put another cyber, as van need its own deck to work.`put in 3 solemn and take out 2 divine wrath.

as is: 7.5/10

Answer 3

dude include things like mana cost so my opinion can be better

Answer 4

7 of rating ... there are a bit of card that remove here is my vandalgion macro monarch deck:

monsters: (19)

mobius x 2

caius x 3

vandalgion x 3

thestalos x 2

raiza x 1

d. d. survivor x 3

spirit reaper x 1

legendary jujitsu master x 3

marshmallon x 1

magic cards: (10)

brain control x 1

soul exchange x 3

smashing x 1

heavy storm x 1

dimensional fissure x 1

reinforcements of the army x 1

lighting vrtex - 1

trap cards: (11)

solemnt judgment x 3

divine wrath x 3

macro cosmos x 2

dark bribe x 3