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Please rate my new poem

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CHASING GHOSTS

My haunted disposition

Pines for loves embrace

Marrow torn asunder

Blessed – clueless face,

Display of lyric composition

And zephyr in the night

Mysterious collaboration

Delivered by the light,

Consequence of vision

Realism takes a hold

Sorrow growing in the shadow

Conforming to the mould,

Searching for some guidance

The Heavens Master speaks

Let grace be upon this heart

From which envy leaks,

Pursuit of pleasure for the eye

Will be put to death

Awesome life to be given

By His Holy breath.

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  1. 5 star men...you're a good writer...ehehehe

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