Please rate my poem 1-10.

Question

Can you hear me god

I have to ask you a simple question

“Why am I like this?”

“Why is the world so cold?”

People hurt one another without a care

People hate for no reason

I’m alone no one cares

I cry and scream no one hears

“Why am I like this?”

“Why is the world so cold?”

Please god answer my prays

Answer 1

Is it a poem or a prayer. Well, anyway its great 10!

Answer 2

sweet...i give it an 8

Answer 3

Its a little on the downer side but its real, your real emotions and i like that. Id give it a 7. :)

Answer 4

you express yourself perfectly. i give it a 10.

Answer 5

6.5

Answer 6

7, I love the repetition and the questions. I think perhaps some more intense imagery would help it reach a 10. But over all very nice. keep on writing. :)

Answer 7

if i had a dime

for every time

i heard a crappy poem

about someone depressed

i would have a **** load of dimes

1

Answer 8

That is a really nice poem! I rate it a 9

Answer 9

8

Answer 10

7.5  a nice effort for sure

Just a thought,,, since you are repeating the two questions again at the end,,, why not remove the last line and insert "Can you hear mr god ?" in it's place ?

"Please god answer my pray(er)s" could then be inserted after line 5

just a thought, and it really may not be a viable one.

Answer 11

it's great .10

Answer 12

very touching poem

9.5

ok ok

10

lol