Please rate my poem 1-10?

Question

1 being the worst and 10 being the best.. Thank you.

Rip My Throat, Drink My Blood,

Strangle Me, Drown Me,

Give Me Vain And Give Me Pain,

Knives Running Through Me,

Oh, Master Of Wounds - Cut Me

Chase Me, Waste Me,

Leave Me In Your Arms

Cold Hands, Fingers Like Razors,

Break My Neck, Put Out My Light,

Crush My Hope, Rape My Life

Cut Me, Hurt Me, Cut Me, Hurt Me...

Cut Me, Cut Me, Cut Me, Cut Me,

Take My Life, Kill Me And Kill Me,

I Am What You Deserve,

Death Do Me Submerge

Answer 1

10!!! its awesome...seriously

Answer 2

i rate it 1 for a poem, and 15 for black metal lyrics.

Answer 3

Intense! Powerful! 7 of 10! (next, try a piece on love and compassion!)

Answer 4

its kinda scary. so i give it a 3.

Answer 5

1!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Answer 6

song writer!

u shuld totally write songs

i like it

kinda depressing but i love it

very nice

Answer 7

very dark  but clearly thats wat ur trying to convey in poetry they use metaphors and stuff to convey how they really feel they just dont say it maybe u could work on that and i dont like lines 11 and 12 i give it a 5

Answer 8

3....

its scaring me a bit.

also its to limited.

You need to paint an overall better picture in the readers mind.

Be more descriptive in your wording.

Answer 9

10 if its about killing yourself ( I do not advise that)

Answer 10

Ok, so Ill be honest its quite around the "emo" theme, but its quite emotional so 8/10  as some things would be real hard to understand if the poem wasn't read to a certain audience. Best of luck though you seem to have a good vibe of thinking to dark poetry!

Answer 11

well if u r rating on a depression scale.. 10!

you need the suicide hotline #?

Answer 12

6-7

Answer 13

I'll give it an 8.

It's not what I appreciate normally, but the balance and flow is rather good when I read it as a chant.

One suggestion if I may ?

Line 13,,, "Take My Life, Kill Me And Kill Me"  possibly change it to;  

Take My Life, Cut Me And Kill Me,,, simply because you can only be killed once and the "Cut Me" ties in with the preceeding lines.

Answer 14

Um

wow

I suppose it really depends on how you see things. I personally don't like it, so I'd give it a low rating. But someone else may LOVE it and give a 10.

If you are truly feeling this way, I'm glad you're getting it out in writing :)

I actually find the "give me vain and give me pain" line fairly intriguing. But the rest of the poem doesn't do much for me.  But you know, if it works for you, it works for you.

Answer 15

This poem is extremely morbid. Usually poems are written to celebrate life.

I can't rate this poem simply because, as  the Reader, you have not brought me anywhere I want to be, you have not shown me anything I want to see, and you definitely did not tell me anything I want to hear.

Please do not get me wrong; I respect your thoughts and feelings-- but posting a suicidal-esque work will not bring you a plethora of raving reviews.

Answer 16

well obviously it's a dark poem, which i have nothing at all against

sometimes they speak the loudest

the 3rd line, "  Give Me Vain And Give Me Pain,"

it sounds good, but not sure that it makes sense...i would play with that one a bit more

as for rating poems, i'd like to see some of your other work so i would know your style a bit better before making a judgement like that

hope you find happiness in your creativity                                          

Answer 17

that was really great! 10/10

Answer 18

dude u sick az h.e.ll wat u must of had a roguh child hood cuz dude i mean wat da **** iz u sick some body need 2 cut ya fingers off 4 typin sum **** like dat  

Answer 19

I guess if I was emo I would give it a 10

But my personal opinion, it's not really unique or "Wow" so I give it a 3 sorry :(

Answer 20

2-3

sorry, just giving an honest opinion.

Answer 21

negative 10 you emo why you still living if you hate life  

Answer 22

goodish can be better just put yur mind to it as a poem writer myself and im emo and thouse who have a prob can go die but ya its ok

Answer 23

-1

Answer 24

2.  because it rhymes.

Answer 25

It really depends on a persons clique. Preps: 0 Emos: 312 Normal: wt? Concerned people: You have issues Neutral people (me): i dunno

Answer 26

10

Answer 27

o that's really good kinda dark i'm a write poems 2 it's my favorite hobbie when i get bored i have a really good one add me as ur friend and i'll send it to u:)

Answer 28

Shakesphere hates your emo poems.

Answer 29

0

Answer 30

Im gonna give you a negative 750 for being an emo *****!

Answer 31

emo or a bad knock off of a good rock song