Please rate my poem comments are welcome ... sometimes i wish?

Question

Sometimes i wonder

why i live this way

why i cant move on

why my pain is here to stay

sometimes i wish

that i could make it right

that i could turn it all around

but it's not worth the fight

sometimes i want to run away

and leave my past behind

leave all the pain and torture

and not bottle it up inside

sometimes i wish that life was great

but then again it's not

i wish for all this pain to end

but i guess i wish a lot

Answer 1

Very Amazing! =D. it kinda reminds me of a song!

its: Skee-Lo - "I Wish"... A very fitting example if you ask me =D!

Answer 2

your poem is great Sometimes I wish too

PEACE

Answer 3

omg yes !

dammm , you're saying wat everyone wants to say

Answer 4

wow.its nice, 4 enthusiastic thumbs way up!!! its well written

and reminiscent of something I've written myself but less dramatic.i like it.

Answer 5

dude that is so good .. !! Everyone wishs for something

♥ excellent ♥

Answer 6

dude i love it!

Answer 7

very good , i think everyone wishes a lot for something