Please rate my poem. (comments too)?

Question

I am 13 years old.

Leukemia’s a disease,

That deemed itself on me.

I don’t know what it is

Although I’ve heard it on TV.

The doctor says it’s serious,

But it still can be cured.

“I don’t know what will happen,

But we’ll try our best, assured!” - doctor

To the 4th floor,

Of the hospital I went.

30 days in that room,

Was the time I spent.

Back home and back to school,

With no hair I went.

When people asked me questions,

I would circumvent.

Chemotherapy,

Where the “meds” I would have to take.

Although it fought the cancer,

My bones would still ache.

Friends and family came together,

To see if I was felling better.

I met an aunt I never knew,

And she helped me all of the way through.

But that was then and this is now,

And things are like before.

But is that how I want it?

I’m not really sure.

Answer 1

It is a good poem.  "Although" is misspelled.  I do not know if you need the word "Doctor".  You should keep this in  journal and write more.  Poetry can help others understand as well as give hope to those who have similar experiences by saying "You are not alone."  Good luck with your writing and your treatment.  I will think of you.

Answer 2

Great poem 10/10!!!

Answer 3

WOW you are a good poet. I give it a 10. Is this something that happen to you?

Answer 4

God be with you Precious one. Don't give up. Keep on writing, you have a great talent. People aren't always as we hope they will be, they get so caught up in their own lives that they forget about the ones who are truly struggling. But don't let the faults of the few sour your outlook. You can express so much through Poetry and people will learn from you.