Please rate my poem from 1 bein worst to 10 bein best?

Question

MAMA

she lived, she loved, she learned a lot

her head so full of dreams

she appeard so perfect

but no one saw her silent tears

or heard her silent screams

so many things she could have been

but addiction got a hold

her life had just turned upside down

she quickly lost control

through everything that she endured

she was trying to stay strong

though she knew in all her suffering

her life would not last long

Answer 1

10 . This comes from your heart . It is also about a very difficult , but real situation that you and your mom both experienced .

Good job !

Answer 2

10 -- it was great and very moving.

Answer 3

10 very deep and meaningful

Answer 4

beautiful words..rate it a; 9

Answer 5

wow that poem has loads of thought and emotions put into it, it almost brought tears, whoever this poem is for im sure they will love it and no how much uve put into this poem, hope everything goes the best it can, best of luck and deffinetly a 10 ! it truley is an amazing poem. x

Answer 6

9, it was really good. Juss wen u rite poems u need to make sure the poem flows in the same pattern. So u shud either change the first section or the other two. i wud juss change the first one it reads like this.

she lived, she loved, she learned a lot

her head so full of dreams

but no one saw her silent tears

or heard her silent screams

but other than that its fabulous

Answer 7

10

It shows a lot of feelings

Answer 8

10!  that was an awesome poem. hope whoever is going thru that is ok.

Answer 9

6.. IT ALMOST TOLD A STORY..... BUT HAS NO REAL ENDING... ITS A GREAT FRAME OF A POEM THOUGH. I REALLY THINK YOU SHOULD ADD TO IT... =) IT HAS A LOT OF POTENTIAL FOR A 10!!!!!!!!!

Answer 10

10

it was brill

have u been through that stuff?

Answer 11

5

Answer 12

I would say about an 8. It was really good!

Answer 13

10 totally awesome!!