Please rate my poem...?

Question

The final exclamation

To a life set on a stage

Nothing left to rapture

Nothing left to rage

Sullen the dust clears

Softly the light fades

Colors slip away -

To gray, too gray.

Catch me if I fall

Hold me ‘til I stand

I eradicate the promise

As my head lands on the sand

Sleep

As the blue turns to red

Dream

No more upon my bed

Cry

If only tears could well

Sigh

Once more and all is still

Goodbye, my I, Goodbye

They said you never tried

And with this kiss

I’ll seal you this

Explosive little lie

Answer 1

Who was she?....lol

very nice

Answer 2

it was a great poem...but i suggest you could use a couple more ryhming words...but all over your poem is mindblowing...its very gentle. and it even brings the emotions of your heart to ones mind..

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!! GR8 GOING!

Answer 3

i didn't understand it that well but THAT IS NOT THE POINT. i love it.

Answer 4

really good i liked it

Answer 5

Lovely poem

I would rate this 8 out of 10

GOD bless you  

Answer 6

good poem. did you have a bad day?