Please rate my poem.?

Question

http://www.poetry.com/voteforme/poemvote1.asp?PID=12507442

Can you rate my poem on poetry.com and tell me what you rated it on here... Thanks

Also tips are welcome

Answer 1

Well I loved it.  One of the best poems on yahoo answers so far.  Though don't get a big head about that because beleive me it's like winning a crippled olympics.  Drip Drip Drip I'm morning.

Answer 2

it really wrapped up well at the end but it kind of scared me at the beginning.  and i don't like how you called baby weak.. i hated that.. then that next line really seemed to have some negative symbolism.  with that soft drip drip thing.. like uck.. my mind was on the baby at that point and i don't see them anything that way.. and then i noticed you were talking about a flower.. but still hurt from the baby part.  like it molded my mind bad.  but ya it kind of made up for it in the last line so good poem.  i guess.  i'm not gonna rate it

Answer 3

It's pretty good,

but there is room for improvement.

Always keep trying,

gets the best out of our us,

gets us out of our shells

gives us wings that can get us anywhere.

all we've got to do,

believe in ourselves.

Competition also motivates one's self.

So check out mine, and try to surpass your best.

http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;...

Thanks!!!