Please rate my thoughts (poem)?

Question

It seemed like forever, that I longed for a soulmate....hiding a secret ache in my heart,that never satisfied. I can remember staring out at the star filled nights,whispering prayers that someday,somewhere,I would find that one special person who was meant just for me.I imagined us laughing at silly things,sharing tears over sad things. We would fade into comfortable silence,as we read each others thoughts.We would love each other passionately and totally.Heart to heart and soul to soul.I waited and dreamed and dreamed and waited,after a while I begin to think my dream was exactly that..only a dream.Then my love,I found you...and that's when I began to believe that dreams really do come true,because I fell in love with you!!!!!

Answer 1

Average.

Answer 2

Nice poem

Needs a form

Try again and submit , you can change some things, although it does read well, spruce it up a little more, and give it some form!!!  Cheers !!!

Answer 3

really thoughtful man!

coolio....

makes u think about relashionships and things. lol

anywayz, really gud!

x*x

Answer 4

i think this should be formatted differently

It seemed like forever,

that I longed for a soulmate....

hiding a secret ache in my heart,

that never satisfied.

I can remember staring out at the star filled nights,

whispering prayers that someday,somewhere,

I would find that one special person

who was meant just for me.

I imagined us laughing at silly things,

sharing tears over sad things.

We would fade into comfortable silence,

as we read each others thoughts.

We would love each other passionately and totally.

Heart to heart and soul to soul.

I waited and dreamed

and dreamed and waited,

after a while

I begin to think my dream was exactly that..only a dream.

Then my love, I found you...

and that's when I began to believe

that dreams really do come true

because I fell in love with you.

i think its much more sentimental and touching without the exclamations at the end.  it is very beautiful though.  i really wish i could write like that.  you are an amazing writer!