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Please rate this poem by Ravi Lauri.......?

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I am the uniqueness of the artist. I am an observer,

from my body grows strange plants of strings.

My body is filled with mucus, liquid and water.

Seeds are planted beneath my skin,

and with the right conditions it all begins to sprout.

Small circular holes from which it all grows out of.

There is a movement, a pushing,

birth giving process of pushing in between the mucus filled earth like soil \ skin.

The hairs push out as tiny worms surfacing as when it rains.

It is all alive.

It is all here.

- Ravi Lauri

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  1. i cant rate it cuz i dont get it


  2. on a scale of 1 - 10, 10 being the best, i give it a 10

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  4. I would rate this poem a grotesque 6 only because it is unique.

    He explains the contractions and birth of life that Mother Earth experiences in a strange light.

    One that I would not care to read again, thank you very much. (just kidding RL just kidding)

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