Please read and comment on my poem!!! thanx!?

Question

Before I Was Me

Before I was me you held my hand and guided me,

Giving me the wings to set me free.

Before I was me you taught me,

The difference between what's right,

And what's wrong.

Before I took that leap, you held me in your arms.

Giving me the strength to go forth in this world,

And the courage to stand on my own,

Before I took that leap you gave me the wisdom,

To see the potential in myself.

Before I flew on my own you whispered words of love,

Building the character in which makes me, me.

Before I flew on my own you taught me to hope,

And chase each and every dream.

Before I was me you held me gently in your arms,

Wrapping me close to your heart,

Guiding me.

Before I was me you gave me your love,

Turning a once baby into a young lady,

With just a simple promise from the heart.

Thanks for reading!!!!

Answer 1

Absolutely fantastic!I like this sentence ''Turning a once baby into a young lady''.I'm waiting for your next one.

Answer 2

awsome  10/10... justa thought get ur poem copyrighted and  maybe published that wat nobody can steal it.

Answer 3

i kinda thought u were an angel in heaven with God at first[before u were u;it made me really think.  It is very good!  Mike P

Answer 4

Very nice use of words and i love the lines it goes well together   it was lovely. Keep writing!!!