Please read my poem and comment?

Question

Rise Above the Crowd

The world is full of people,

Content to be what they are,

Who never know the joy of success;

They lack the will to go that far.

Yet in this world there is a need,

For some to lead the rest

The rise above the average life,

By the giving of their best.

Am i the one who dares,

To try when challenged by the task

To rise to heights I've never dreamed,

Or is that to much to ask?

This can be my year,

For great purpose to achieve

If I accept the challenge,

And in myself believe.

Thanks for reading!

Answer 1

wow thats reallyyy good.:)

answer mien please:

http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;...

Answer 2

That poem is really insightful. You Could become a famous poet some day.