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can you please read my poem and edit it please!!!! be harsh i won't get offended seriously...i posted a poem similar to this yesterday but i'm trying two different versions.....so give me all of your thoughts....and i'm 14 btw but don't let that change what you sayHe sits across from meA table separating the space between usI try to pay attention to a conversationWith no meaning to meBut my gaze returns back to himI study every contour of his faceAmazed at his reactionsTo words unheardI am immersed in himSavoring every moment we have togetherFor I know they won’t last longSoon lost in one of my fantasiesI imagine the passionate kiss we would shareBut I snap back into realityKnowing in my heartThat it was only a wishHe turns his head Now facing meHis blue eyes twinkleAs he smiles at meAnd turns away againI bite my lipsTrying to hold back the grinThreatening to escapeMy heart is jumping for joyThinking that there might be a chanceAfter all
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