Please read my poem?

Question

Hear her whispers in your ear,

The faded smiles, that never last,

Hurt just once, would cause such fear,

Meet the mistress of your past.

The forbidden fruit, sat to wait,

Her bittersweet scent rose so high,

In your reach to grasp and take,

Give in now, why deny?

A soulless soul, not fit to live,

A heart that harbours only pain,

And there she is, so much to give,

The girl that dances in the rain.

You chose to cast her away,

Without a second thought,

She was just your game to play,

So why hide how hard you fought?

From wrist to wrist, your fate is tied,

Black and white and warmth and cold,

Your love for her is not denied,

She is yours to want and hold.

Answer 1

i loved it sounds alittle dark but in a good way

Answer 2

that is a grate poem one you could get published if you wanted you have talent

Answer 3

that is a wonderful poem.

Answer 4

This poem is very good and quite sad, I would like to post it on the guest poetry page of our website http://www.poemsbysilvertongue.com/

keep up the good work