Please read my poems...(they rhyme)....What do you think of them?

Question

In the past 3 weeks i have started to write poetry. These are what i have so far:

http://l3luel3ubbles.piczo.com/mypoems?preview=y&sl=0&st=0&cr=2

Please be aware that i am only 15 and i am new to writing poetry. I would also like to point out that only spend about 15 mintues on each poem as i am very busy.

Which poem is your favourite and why?

Any comments are welcome!

Thanks.

Answer 1

These poems are fantastic!  What I love the most is the emotions that you put in them, which I believe is the most important thing in poetry; to make the reader feel. I think that these poems are really able to make the reader feel the emotions that they would if they were in that situation. My favourite is "Beloved Grandpa" because I can relate to that one best, having lost a grandparent.

Answer 2

wow... ur a really good poet!! lol especially for ur age!

i like the 'grandad' one!! its full of emotions and sympathy and ur grief... i like it.. lol

you should put this on some compition cuase i think u have a chance to win! try to make a short story out of theses peoms so, that will be great!