Please read- what do you think?

Question

I put little drops of love for you, in my silver cup,

I left it out at twilight and bid you drink them up.

I filled my plate with starlight and poured moonbeams in my bowl,

I danced thrice round them naked and bid you take them whole.

I lay down close beside you and whispered you my heart,

I left my sorrow on your doorstep, and bid that it depart

Answer 1

It sounds wonderful.

It flows nicely.

After I read it the first time, I went back through and read it outloud. and it was still wonderful

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Answer 2

Love potion #10, which is what I give this delight!

Answer 3

That speaks softly to my senses...

It is delicate like the fairies in a dew lit meadow

I hope this is just the first or many from your pen as it

evokes feelings of happiness and spontaneity!

Thank you for sharing !

Answer 4

thats rlly good =]

im sure you put a lot of thought into that

Answer 5

that is a very good poem! it's great.

Answer 6

Your visuals have a sense of mythology to them - it adds intrigue to the story. ♥

Answer 7

I really like it!!!!

Answer 8

It is lovely.

How original.

Answer 9

This is absolutely lovely.  Wow.  This is a 10 in my book. . . just beautiful.