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I put little drops of love for you, in my silver cup,

I left it out at twilight and bid you drink them up.

I filled my plate with starlight and poured moonbeams in my bowl,

I danced thrice round them naked and bid you take them whole.

I lay down close beside you and whispered you my heart,

I left my sorrow on your doorstep, and bid that it depart

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  1. It sounds wonderful.

    It flows nicely.

    After I read it the first time, I went back through and read it outloud. and it was still wonderful

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  2. Love potion #10, which is what I give this delight!

  3. That speaks softly to my senses...

    It is delicate like the fairies in a dew lit meadow

    I hope this is just the first or many from your pen as it

    evokes feelings of happiness and spontaneity!

    Thank you for sharing !

  4. thats rlly good =]

    im sure you put a lot of thought into that

  5. that is a very good poem! it's great.

  6. Your visuals have a sense of mythology to them - it adds intrigue to the story. ♥

  7. I really like it!!!!

  8. It is lovely.

    How original.

  9. This is absolutely lovely.  Wow.  This is a 10 in my book. . . just beautiful.

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