Please review my dialogue. Your opinion on its style and content and meaning?

Question

It's philosophical in nature - but it's a good, fun read - and figurative too.

Please give me your opinions on the piece. Was the dialogue thought-provoking? What did you think of the style?

What meaning did it convey to you - as in what was, in your opinion, the debate about?

link: http://mlogy.blogspot.com/2008/09/cameo-tree-and-its-shadow.html

Many Thanks

Answer 1

Profound metaphors.

And they will argue for a long time more, because the philosopher cannot prove that he is a tree, and not a shadow, until the tree decides it himself. Good metaphors for different things in reality.

Keep writing.

Answer 2

"What did you think of the style?"

I thought that this piece was very, very well written. It was fun, up-beat but not too lyrical, and quite catchy.

"Was the dialogue thought-provoking?"

Yes, indeed it was. It made me think of how very judgemental we all can be about someone's first impression of themselves.

"What meaning did it convey to you - as in what was, in your opinion, the debate about?"

I believe that it speaks strongly of how we all second-guess or doubt who we are and who we were made to be. We all feel like shadows that are some times unrecognizable and easily misinterpreted-yet we are all here for the world to see.

Thank you for sharing your piece with us! :)