What could I do to this paragraph? (Literary Critique on the Metamorphosis)
In scene one of the first chapter, Gregor Samsa wakes up. He is all alone and notices that he has transformed into a large beetle and Vladimir states that “Gregor’s human impressions still mingle with his new insect instincts†Gregor at that point does not know what to do, because he is so used to being a human, that he does not know what to do or how to use his new body. In viewing the critic’s psychoanalytic approach, one would be surprised at the new metamorphosis.
Okay, the only problem I have with this paragraph is this sentence, "In viewing the critic’s psychoanalytic approach, one would be surprised at the new metamorphosis." I don't know what to add onto it. I know it may sound a little cheesy, but that's where all of you come in to help, if you would be so kind, that is. Thanks! =D
Yes, I do accept Constructive Criticism on my work, please criticize if there are any areas that need to be replaced or changed
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