Question:

Please seriously tell me if this is a nice poem peeps?

by Guest62893  |  earlier

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well i just wanna know cuz, i wrote it off the top of my head..

and rambo rambo.

I love you, but you’ll never see.

You walk past me in the halls as if I were a tree.

Standing tall and still,

yet no water to live.

Still breathing and shining bright

but when the sun looks away

it starts to get tight.

My heart swells like an open cut

with no bandage to pull it back.

Still I wait for you on that day

when you come and say a deliberate hey.

The joy in my heart would be indescribable

and I’d give up the sun and the moon,

for you to be reliable.

Just give me the chance

and I promise I won’t do you wrong

I’ll fix your wounds instead of mine,

for no matter how long.

by :me

blah blah ppl say its a crush but fak you lol

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  1. i like it alot but it sound like u like him


  2. i really like it

  3. It's terrible. Sorry. I just read some beautiful poetry and it's a stark contrast...

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