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Please <span title="comment/interpret/critique">comment/interpret/critiqu...</span> my new poem. It would mean a lot to me. Please.?

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' If I knew'

If I knew where I was going, I'd go.

Love is beautiful, love is destructive.

And so am I.

Hate is ugly, hate is destructive.

And so am I.

I am pure.

And I sin.

I am whole.

Also broken.

I am somebody.

Miss nobody.

I know everything.

I know nothing.

I am here.

I am there.

My body is flexible, standing still.

My soul is a preconceived notion.

If I knew where I was going, I'd go.

I'd take you with me if I could.

Would you come along?

If I knew..

Sarah J

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  1. Sarah, Sarah, Sarah, What kind of poem is that? I&#039;d would call it light  hearted , do you have any more?


  2. Simple and pure.

  3. I like it alot you should write more

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