Please tell me how can i improve this poem?

Question

first what do you think of this poem and is there anything i can improve....though its quite long poem but read it, you will love it

Life in foster family

Joining the foster family, the new life begins

You don’t know what to expect next

But to hope for the best, thinking

How will I be treated?

How will I be cared for?

But I feel as it would be the same as being with mom

Got up in the morning, confused and embarrassed

Where am I?

But I hear an unfamiliar voice, Mrs. C

Calling, you are late for the school

Got up quickly, and a bit nervous

Though not because of the school

For the first few days, you see the smile on Mrs. C’s face

And slowly, this begins to disappear

As usual you sleep at night, and then the dream comes

A dream, when I was with mom and dad

For a while I find myself being with them

Laughing and having funs

Answer 1

This is bloody fantastic! You have a rare talent. Oh my, this is just so evocative!

Answer 2

Life itself is the foster child of nature blending of love and hatred

We want to remain away from which we dont want

But life sails its nest into the desert of that unwanted

Lets think what we have is better than many who have nothing to be settled

Answer 3

you can add smile

Answer 4

I think your poem is really good, I dont think you need to improve it.  But what makes a good poem? A good poet. And you clearly are. Good poems touch that sort of power.