Please tell me how good my poem is. please be nice but critque?

Question

Ode to the next future president

Oh Obama Oh Obama

I walked home from work today

Cuz gas prices were to high in the bay

I would really like to say

Hey boss give me more money

So I can "drive" home and give it to my honey

Answer 1

omg! that was really good. i loved it. you are really creative.

Answer 2

Dr Seuss after a few cocktails

Answer 3

It'd be OK but I hate Obama. They call him Obama because when he gets into office he's gonna Obama this place! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH...

Answer 4

ha ha makes no sense, well it makes sence but u can do better. ur going from the president to ur boss. its cute i guess for something u probably came up with in two seconds walking home from ur job

Answer 5

To put it nicely, its not winning any awards, but its short and to the point.

Answer 6

Hey, that sounds great! political views in poetry really show the "soul" of the poet. Write other poems dealing with other things, too. Revealing your thoughts and views of things is like having a conversation, and readers really like that!

just don't get too dirty into things, like trash people's reputations.

Answer 7

id change it to something regarding gas prices, if you do that it might make more sense, lol, not bad for a quickie, though, as has been said before

Answer 8

wow i like it!

i like the how you use the contraversy of the high fuel prices.

Answer 9

its very stupid really....its a political c**p ball you think you can pass as a poem

Answer 10

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