the original Romeo and Juliet prologue is here:
Two households, both alike in dignity,
In fair Verona, where we lay our scene,
From ancient grudge break to new mutiny,
Where civil blood makes civil hands unclean.
From forth the fatal loins of these two foes
A pair of star-cross'd lovers take their life;
Whole misadventured piteous overthrows
Do with their death bury their parents' strife.
The fearful passage of their death-mark'd love,
And the continuance of their parents' rage,
Which, but their children's end, nought could remove,
Is now the two hours' traffic of our stage;
The which if you with patient ears attend,
What here shall miss, our toil shall strive to mend.
My version is here:
There were two families (Montages and Capulets) living in a beautiful city - Verona. The families are both alike in social status, they had a disagreement for a long time which had carried through generations. The argument had caused violence in the two civilised family. The families each had a child. They children who are cursed with bad luck fall in love with each other and commit suicide. Only their death would stop their parents’ hate and anger. The lovers’ suicides are now told on stage and listen patiently to find out what happens.
Dose my version make sense and is it right?
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