Please tell me if these are good??? do read!!?

Question

i'm an aspiring songwriter and please tell me if these are good. i'm 16 and wrote these myself. tell me what you think!!!

song 1: "Someday"

When I look out the window

I feel like I have been here

For at least a century

We have spent all the times

Together with each other

But I don’t know when

I may have to leave

Ch: Someday I’ll be driving away

Someday I’ll be leaving you

Someday I’ll not be here

Someday I may be gone

Maybe forever, I don’t know

Of for how long, can’t say

I don’t know when I may leave

I have been locked up

I search for something far away

What I want is not in this town

Someday I wanna be away

I’ve got my dreams

Just don’t wanna survive

I wanna live my way

I am going to drive away (Someday)

I am going to get far away (someday)

I am going to leave home (Someday)

Someday I’ll be gone

Far way, someday

Song 2: "Tears"

Time has taken a toll on me

I am not as I used to be

I often get the blues

My life seems way too loose

I’ve gotta hold on tight

To win over this fight

I’m gonna be much harder

Will be a fighter

Ch: There’s nothing in life at all

What I used to have

Is left no more

What I have, I am ready

To shed them down

And they are my tears

These will soon fall upon my cheek

My soul is tired

I cry often on the inside

Outside I seem fine

But in reality I have

Been going down with my fears

And keep on shedding tears

I am wet with my tears

These won’t stop falling down

I am crying more on the inside

Than I appear on the outside

What I had, I shed them down

Which are my tears

These won’t falling down

song 3: "You & Me"

Any day you wanna come

I’ll be right here

I’m ready to wait a lifetime

Just for you

You know my heart’s aching

But I don’t mind it

If this bit of waiting

Can get you by my side

Ch: how will I know

How we’re gonna be

I want to keep the doors open

Just for you

It would be so good

Falling in love

You and me

Oh yeah, you and me

You know we’re meant to be

Don’t know when you’ll see

Would it really take a lifetime

For you

I know my patience’s ending

How do I make you

See who loves you the best

Me or her

I can wait but still

I am impatient

I can’t wait any longer

For you and me

We’re just meant to be

You and me

I wish there was you and me

You and me

Just you and me

Answer 1

Have you got some chords?

Answer 2

Like Totally Awesome you should sing that in ur school talent show!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!... It was rele great

Answer 3

Hey,

I like what you've written, song-writing is a journey so the most important thing is to keep writing.  You may find you're writing improves over time.  Also, playing an instrument like the piano or guitar will give you the ability to "flesh out" your songs.  Good luck.